Disco Stu reference? :P
I'm giving you 10s so as to not ruin your scores or put you down. I do think you have a good groove in you, and you can express it rather well. My advice based on solely having heard this track is that you shoot for simple basslines, like the first one on this song. That's extremely catchy. The strings are really good too, maybe if you had invested time on creating a lead melody this could be worth gold.
Good job!